The Axarian Revolution [PROGRESS STOPPED FOR NOW]

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Alright, I posted the seventh quest in the series! However, due to my time constraints, I'm only posting the first quest here; every other quest is on our wiki page. 
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In a land called the Azzain Peninsula, a dictatorship rules a large and prosperous city named Azzan. Now this dictatorship subjugates its pawns, exiles heretics or anyone deemed to cause political instability, and imports unsuspecting newcomers to be brainwashed into their new society.  …

Luckily inside Axar, a city just south of Azzan and is made up of those exiled citizens, hides a resistance known as the Zarr Clan. This resistance is a group of honest Axarians who know what the Priests are doing and they need the help of an outsider to launch one of the most daring feats in Runescape's history: end the tyranny the Priests bring upon their world.

This series is fun, dramatic, and violent: a perfect mix of ingredients for a gripping political drama…all in these nine challenging quests. Of course the first quest is easiest, being only novice, but each successive quest will get harder, with the last three (3) quests being grandmaster.

So, are you up for the challenge?

3 days....

The preparations are starting...

Part I is released today, since this quest is set up in 5 sections. I reduced the step count TREMENDOUSLY like by 20 steps, by removing and combining them.

Part I is the longest part of the quest, about half, but encompasses and presents a lot of information that is explained much later in the quest.

EDIT: I will post Part II, since as of now it is only a paragraph in length.

You can keep me from releasing this today, just say so, and I can find a way to reschedule to Revelation Ceremony.

reserved. section IV should be on the next page

reserved. section IV should be on the next page

Oh yeah, you're fully on the map now.

I'll finish reading this by next week, when I've much more time on my hands to fully enjoy it.

thank you guys!

This thread is closed for a few days while I make some changes to the RSOF, this version, and my Word document for this quest. Sorry for any inconvenience. I will log the steps changed so you don't have to reread the entire document. They will be very small tweaks.

Ok and plus Axar V was pretty good except for the part of the ecess of deaths , but overall a great quest

the part of excessive deaths? there are many of those throughout the series.

thanks for your support

Ok and when I mean excesivess deaths I meant the excecivess deaths of principal character, and you are welcome

Deaths of key characters can build a story.

I remember watching a film, I can't remember which, where the character I thought was the main character and they actually spent a fair bit getting you to care about him as a character, got killed really suddenly.