Gielinor's Fiyre Rewrite Discussion

Hello all? Remember my giant quest? Gielinor's Fiyre?

Well, I have basically rewritten the quest. Removed excess steps and characters. And updated it to the rest of the Runescape world. It existed then and will exist now.

I have have shaved off so many pages from my original text document, improved the language and grammar, and changed many of the mechanics.

Today, I will just give the summary/teaser. Nothing more. Nothing less. Agree to my changes? Voice your opinion! Hopefully, this quest will be more deeply rooted to the supposed prequel, The Purification.

(Although both seem quite out-of-the blue )


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(NOTE: I changed Jean Earie to Jacques Earie)

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Summary of changes so far:

- The text document many pages shorter
- There are less repetitive steps
- No more Jorral, Temple Knights, and Savant
- Changed the search for virtually every Fiyre
- Improved dialog and grammar
- Invented a new way to search for clues for the Fiyre; it is quicker and more efficient, however kept the Demonically Enchanted Key'
- Changed the rewards and requirements

I remember this. Epic quest!
Good luck with the rewrite.

Hah, thanks!

Yeah... I'm seriously considering REMOVING Jorral from this quest and its prequel.

In the game, he is just a one dimensional character. I honestly think he should be rather interesting. However, Jagex has his purpose only in the time-travelling, miniscule quest line. I mean, he is a rather boring character unlocking the secrets of time travel. If I were to actual remove his character from the story, what would happen?

And If I do remove Jorral, since he is one of the main protagonists, who would I replace him with? Help me with this decision! I can't work on the quest further without knowing.

Since it seems that no one wanted to help me, I've made the decision to remove Jorral.

I replaced him with a man named Seth Hart, a man who lives in the Seer's Village. He is moderately wealthy, unemployed, divorced, and was once a member of the Gielinor's Fiyre Cult. He is smart, hardy, and ashamed of his past.



Of course, the tree in front of his house would be removed.

Now, please excuse me while I change The Purification.

I won't be on next week or weekend; rehearsals and performances for our Spring Musical. That means I can't work on Gielinor's Fiyre either.

Dragon78114 wrote:Of course, the tree in front of his house would be removed.

Wait, is it actually blocking the path in?

3mptylord wrote:

Dragon78114 wrote:Of course, the tree in front of his house would be removed.

Wait, is it actually blocking the path in?

if you look closely on the map, in front of the door to Seth's house is a tree

I can see that there is a tree there, but I can't tell the answer to my question... which is why I asked.

I think so. The tree my have to go away if people want to enter, and if not, it should go anyway or I can move the door south somewhat.

I'm so excited! On this site at least, there will be maps to help everyone see where they have to do stuff!

Wait... did you ADD the house to the map? And simply forgot to erase the tree? 'cause otherwise I'm confused as to how you can't know if it's in the way, since I presume you will have checked (I cannot as I'm not a member).

If he's fictional (which would explain lack of RSWiki page), why did he choose to set-up in Seer's? Why not Catherby, or somewhere where the inhabitants aren't always raving about crazy prophecies and visions?

Yes, I did add the house to map and forgot to clear out the tree.

I added him in Seer's Village because the man is the central character in the Prelude. The murder is just northwest. I previously made you go all the way out to Jorral (which was unfortunately inconvenient).

Also, I made him up. He was a past member of Gielinor's Fiyre cult. He felt that Seer's village was nivce I guess, especially after his divorce with his wife. Also, he once had those crazy philosophies, but came more sane.

He likes the magical atmosphere; it is nice and relatively small yet populated. A great place to settle.

Misunderstanding averted.

Musical is over. I shall return to writing soon, but AP exams are around the corner. Since the play has eaten all my time for the past 3 months, especially the past few weeks, I am WAY far behind than I should. -.-

Hehe, I've performed in a musical.

Which AP's?

(I'm taking ze english ones, and spanish)

English Comp, Cal AB, Art History, US History

My quest is starting to shine, but should I go ahead and start posting it?

EDIT: I Might just post the Prologue... I don't know...

For what reason might you not want to post it?

good point.

The only reason holding me back is that I am nervous that it isn't done, but I don't want to overdo it. Gah! I'll post the prologue. -.-