The Storywriter (my book)

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Introduction:

The writer stares at the blank sheet of clear white paper in front of him, unable to think of something to write. Usually the ink is flowing across the paper like a river, creating a world around it as it spreads across the paper. The past couple months were different. The past couple months writing has been challenging. There are no tales of depressing grief, none of heart warming romance. The past couple months, the writer has not been able to finish an idea, unable to continue what he begins. Frustrated, he crumples the snowy white paper and throws it at the floor. The crumpled paper hits many of his other unfinished idea's. The floor was covered in them. The Uwalls around him are a deep blue and on them there is one thing, hung there, perfectly straight, is a portrait of a man and a women, holding hand and smiling in a garden. The picture was labeled "Rodrick and Lucile, Falls garden." The Writer looked at the picture and started to weep.

Spoiler:

Dark, that excerpt you found, where was it?

I have finished chapter one, I am only showing it upon request and I will show it only to those I trust, and I swear if you take the story I will hunt you down. Thank you for the consideration and I hope to get some good criticism from you guys!