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Post by Dark Avorian Sun Dec 05, 2010 9:01 am

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This thread is established by me for discussion of the protectorate. I will be working on this and claim at least a limited form of editorial control. Critique, advise are welcome.

The Diminor

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Post by Zectiox Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:03 am

okey when I re-read this well made text I found some interesting thoughts.. "the mist-weavers" some kind of people who uses the mist as a powerful weapon??

and the Citat from the story "Inside the open sarcophagi are the perfectly preserved bodies of four of the Forerunners." Now we get to maybe see one Forerunner or is theese mummies of forerunners?

+ love the roles of the Diminors. Still I imagine them as monks, tall creatures in elemental-colored robes and the faces hided in the hood (as shown to non-diminors)
= ofc Diminors is a NPC-race, I thought a minute of how it would be to be a diminor, but still naah...
+ I like your description of how a diminor looks like. And the body that 3mptylord painted is quite good as well.
+ great Idea of having a symbol of their hands (specially when the children getting one at a certain age, - as a ritual)

- Thinking of something that still is ??????.. but cant figure out what really,


write more about the Diminors. You got the Dark shore and Dark sea quite good. So it is a war between the "mist-weavers" and the Diminors... As the "fort-commander" is facing to get back the Tower of Dili.. (getting the image of the saxon who crawled back to that Cerdic (the leader of the Saxon) bloody and scared to hell after that King Arthur and Merlins "soldiers" slaughtered the first wave of the saxon soldiers marching into the battlefield) Tongue anyway great story! : )

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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:13 am

Could the barges travel across the cloud sea? Tongue
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Post by Dark Avorian Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:39 am

Options

A) Yes!
B) Sorta but they can fall rather easily
C) The Magic doesn't let them

Takeyour pick
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Post by Duskcurse Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:45 am

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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 01, 2011 3:12 am

B Smile
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:47 am

B , I think ;D
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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 08, 2011 6:25 am

How do you think survivors of a ship wrecked whilst out on the Cloud Sea would react?
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Post by Gladzosaurus Rex Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:42 am

Find a cloud island, build hammocks, mix cocktails and make love to the locals. Or to each other, if there are no locals.
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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:57 am

I think they'd have crashed into lower world. The chance of survivors would probably be slim, given the drop, but... Tongue
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Post by Zectiox Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:26 am

one survivor, hidden somewhere?
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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:50 am

It's a hypothetical. The chances of a survivor is slim, I'm merely wondering how the Diminor would react to the lower world. Tongue
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Post by Zectiox Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:06 am

I think the diminors could think that the lower worlds citizens are false believers. though I dont know what the diminors are believing in... If they ever get to know the lower world and its inhabitant.

there could always be surviors of children, or babies, taken cared of some lonley inhabitant of pallis, then grown to man/women and hidden so that the diminors cant find him/her..

I havent read page 3 where I may find answers that I still dont have questions for.. Tongue
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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:12 am

I don't think "survivors" would work the other way around... you don't accidentally fall upwards a thousand miles. If a diminor was to find itself alone in a human world, what they believe would probably be next to useless... since they are hopelessly outnumbered. I guess they would try and return?
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Post by Zectiox Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:17 am

Oh now I remember what the question was..

So yes they would fall. Its clouds and something is bellow, I think they would be dead if they fell down? wouldn't day? something is holding this ship to floating over the clouds, without it, its just a boat.

The flying dutchmen without its captain to sail it on the skies are just a simple myth, and a boat.

If the ship that sails over the cloud sea, sinks. or looses what holding it over the clouds, it falls from heaven down on the people below, on the lower world? simple.
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Post by Dark Avorian Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:17 am

Erm...there might be a few bak strong enough to draw the clouds to themselves and fly back to the brink on the wings of mist...but I doubt anyone would survive the fall..
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:05 am

well something would be made so that pallis is not revealed for the lower world inhabitant. Some diminors or anywone who are travling over the cload sea, and are in a storm and their ship is sinking. They fall.. what are the reactions down under? creations of new races falling from the heavens down on Gielinor.

IF someone would survive, I think they would be taken as gods or holy things that Guthix or any other god is sending down to them...

To prevent this from happening, why not having somekind of net just below or inside the cload, just so that anyone that is falling through the cload is getting stuck in the net. Still noone could survive. (If I got it right, forgive me If I mix them up or use them wrong. if dark sea is the same as cload sea?) <-- if it could be like that, as cload = dark. Why not having the net as something magic. Anything that falling into the net is turning into rain or snow? Noone will notice on the lower world? Tongue think of it, brutally but a solution
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Post by The Empty Lord Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:45 am

A bit off topic for Pallis, I guess, but that would make a great lower world story. Whether of Diminor or Forerunner origin, a craft crashing into the lower world with survivors. The lower world would think them aliens, I guess, given that it was a massive ship falling from the sky with crazy engines and magic. The descendants might be a little dissimilar to the current inhabitants of Pallis, depending on how long they've been on Lower World.
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:50 am

thougt of a good questline due to that too. it could be something to spin on to some sort of masterpiece Grin
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:08 am

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This may seen a bit gibbrish. Actual it is Darks introduction to the dark sea only translated into a "melodic"-fantasy language. Just thought "why not, we give it a shot" how the language of the diminors could look like (despite 3mptys "order" to have it as english Tongue no offence. this is just a view of mine Tongue)
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Post by The Empty Lord Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:09 pm

When have I ever specified English? Tongue
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:49 pm

hmm you havent really.. sry.. thought you had as a game language.

where did I found that you meant that again. Sorry if I offended you my lord..

but anyway.. What about the translation in other hand? the site where I translated it is http://www.chaoticshiny.com/langreplace.php and from the "alphapet"-scrollbar I used "melodic 1"... Tongue ofc you can make your own language just by putting some words to be some other words "az" on the pallis language could be english "e" or something like that Tongue (by choosing "custom" instead of "melodic" Tongue)
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Post by The Empty Lord Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:55 pm

It's not really a language, more a code. Tongue

But I don't object to different languages. "Server" language is just so the players can read it. Wink
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Post by Zectiox Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:14 pm

yeah code.. actually... but.. it is english in another language ;D

oh okey, sry (: . oh then I see, that was it ;D
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Post by Dark Avorian Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:18 am

The religion of the Diminor:

The diminor worship one thing, and one thing alone: The fountain of Alazor.

Alazor, the great city of the diminor, towers above the exact spot where the diminor first came to life. Beneath the central palace lies a vast foundation that stretches to the lake bed. The foundation, from waterlevel, to lakebed, is manned entirely by an elite branch of the Alazorin Guard.

The Dark Guard is a holy brotherhood. They wear armor of purest black, black metal upon black leather, covered by black cloaks, mantles and tabards, their blades are black metal upon handles of black wood, adorned with black gems and wrapped in black leather. They obey only their own officers, and the Protector of Darkshore. Although ostensibly the High Protector selects the lord of Darkshore, it is the commanders of this holy brotherhood who elect him.

At the depth sof the foundation, in the very center, is a single round room. The only way in is a hall that spirals around it seven times. This hall is manned by many Dark Guards, but to a man they are all high officers within the guard.

In this room, their is a small, bubbling spring. The soft sound of the water sings from the walls, and the water shines with a holy light. This water is filled with pure, distilled, magic. Once, this spring sat at the center of a great mountain bowl. It was here that a small group of beasts, who we might classify as monkeys or lemurs in our world, although they were big as apes, first drank from the holy water.

They were given sentience, they became intelligent. They formed a language, learned of fire and metal and stone. They became a shadow of a reflection of a depiction of the forerunners. They built round the spring, and then the Mouths filled the bowl of the mountains with water, and the lake, and the city were formed. And the diminor went forth to claim the land they could, and restore the glory of the forerunners, whose hands had made teh fountain, a pure source of magic, power, and sentience.
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Post by Zectiox Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:18 am

cool Grin
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