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Post by Dragon78114 Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:30 am

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Gielinor's Fiyre

NEW! And Improved! Grin

After toiling over it forever, here is this behemoth. Now, I'm just uploading the prologue. You should find that it is so much shorter with plenty of major changes! Smile

"Official Synopsis":
Mellissa Earie is in another dilemma. Her husband quickly left her house after you restored his sanity, and requires you to search for him. However, things swiftly turn grim as a sinister secret is discovered. In fact, it leads into a long, perilous, Grandmaster-ranking quest where you must tear yourself through a humongous cult, Gielinor's Fiyre, to prevent them from performing their Ritual of Alignment. This ritual involves a mass suicide of the entire cult and the leader becomes a god via the plunder of a secret set of holy armour called Fiyres. Meanwhile, you dare yourself to take the daunting task to find and deactivate the Fiyres before the cult can use them and provoke the Edicts of Guthix to erase and rebuild the world.

Can you win this race against time, calling upon most of your skills as an adventurer and survivor to find and wear your prize?

Here's a quick summary of changes I've made:
- The text document many pages shorter
- There are less repetitive steps
- No more Jorral, Temple Knights, and Savant
- Changed the search for virtually every Fiyre
- Improved dialog and grammar
- Invented a new way to search for clues for the Fiyre; it is quicker and more efficient, however kept the Demonically Enchanted Key
- Changed the rewards and requirements

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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:23 pm

6. Enter the cave, and everything will go black.

*Cut scene*

.The screen will from black to reveal a group of three cultists in the main hall, in front of the doors which you used your Adamantite Key on.

Cult Member 1: "Man, do I ever want to get the chance to see A REAL god once the ceremony is complete!"
Cult Member 3: "Yup! We might even meet Guthix!"
Cult Member 2: "Or Saradomin, or Zamorak, or Armadyl, or Bandos, or Zaros, or Seren, or Scabaras, or, or, or, or-"
Cult Member 1: "Hold that thought... I think I hear something!"

The door bursts open. All three cultists notice you as you inch your last inches out of the hole.

*End cutscene*

7. Kill all three members. They will drop their regular stuff as usual, BUT one of them will drop a Gielinor's Fiyre Uniform!

8. Pick up the clothes (if you want to) and carry on as if you were going to the Ceremony Room. But this time, take the other route.

It will eventually lead you in the sleeping chambers and mess hall. The room is littered with various kinds of foods, chairs, beds, and tables. There is one cult member in the room. Kill him. One more cult member to go!!

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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:24 pm

9. Now head north, you can take the food there. Most of it is junk like cabbage, tuna, shrimp, various Gnomish delights, regular beer, and other various, low-leveled foods. It is not recommended; although there is a rare chance you might get a couple of Monkfish, Sharks, or Manta Rays.

You should travel north into a room with a large cauldron with something vile bubbling in it. On the north wall, there is a 'Mysterious Peep Hole'.

Make sure you have OVER 750LP left before you do this, or you WILL DIE.

Click on it, and...

*Cutscene*
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The screen will fade to black, then fading from black, showing the Ceremony Room with a huge black-colored hole in the middle of the room.

Then, the camera will snap back to you. The camera will pan to a single cult member running through the mess hall with an Abyssal Whip. He will run to you in the room, will use the special on you. You can't move and will be dealt 500LP. He will pickpocket you, stealing your Demonic Doll. Thus making little lightning bolts literally zap out of you, and causes you to be drained 250LP.

Then the cult member will throw the doll in the cauldron. The camera will pan to the cauldron which is now surging with magical energies and will start to shake. Also, it makes him fly into the wall; making a nice little implant in the wall.

Then you will make a comment:
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You: "Oh dear, this looks like it is about to explode, I gotta get out of here!"
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*End Cutscene*

Hint: RUN TO THE ENTRANCE HALLWAY! You will have a little timer on the top right corner telling you how much time you have before the cauldron explodes.

Once you run all the way back to the entrance hallway (the room where you came in from)...

*Cutscene*
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The camera will quickly pan to the hallway where there will be a large rumble, and a large blast of red light.
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*End Cutscene*

The timer will disappear.
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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:24 pm

10. Travel back to the room with the cauldron, and unfortunately, the room will be completely burned, filled with the item, "ash," and the rock walls are all blackened.

11. Go into the room with the cauldron, and there will be an entrance that was blown through. On the floor of the Ceremony Room, there is this weird portal thingy that looks like a black hole. If you only have 10LP, it would be best to leave and come back and prepare for a huge fight with a secret level-470 dude.

12. Your Demonic Doll is at the bottom of the cauldron. Try to pick up your doll, but it will float into the black hole thingy.

Then, a Giant Demonic Doll (level 1470) emerges from the hole.

DO NOT ATTACK IT! If you do, it will get mad and kill you. No matter what prayers, armour, or LP you have, one hit is all it takes to send you to your grave.

13. Walk around it and pray at the altar at the end of the room. Luckily, it is not aggressive.

A message in your chat box will say, "You feel blessed as the power of Guthix tunes your mind, body, and soul. You may use his powers for this time only, but only the most Pious and the Eternal may use it."
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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:25 pm

14. Wear your Charged Amulet of Eternal Fire, and turn the 'Piety' prayer on. In the Combat choosing section of your inventory, click the 'Special Attack.' There will be an extra bar for the amulet (if you aren't already wielding a weapon that has special attack).

15. Now you may kill the Giant Demonic Doll.

Once you attack it...

*Cutscene*
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As you hit the Doll, you will send your soul into the Doll. Causing it to spew energy out and twitch much like the Constitution Cape emote. But then, its magic energy quickly drains out, the room will glow a very light blue (if not white) light and will end.

Your soul will go back into your body. The doll is still huge, and you have to kill it. It is now weak enough to fight (it is now level 470).

You will then make a comment:
You: "Did I JUST do that?"
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*End cutscene*

16. During the battle, the doll will attack with all three side of the combat triangle! Shock However, its melee can defeat anything in a few mighty swipes. So, what is best is to range or mage it (you may use magic again) from behind the altar. You can only attack this doll creature while praying Piety and wearing your Amulet. If you take them off, the doll will OBLITERATE you. Eat when you need to, and I hope you were smart enough to super set before this…this guy is crazy and can kill anyone very quickly (hits up to 650) with melee. Its range and mage attacks can hit up to 550, so be careful. Its range attacks look like the Fire Surge spell, but they aren’t magical attacks. Its magical attacks are like lightning strikes mixed with a water surge. The doll cannot be poisoned, since it isn’t a living creature. As you progress through the battle, the doll will start to have a light blue aura of magical energy surrounding it. The lower its LP, the more of this blue aura appears.

It is incredibly weak to leaf-bladed weaponry, but only moderately weak to slayer darts, and broad arrows.

Occasionally, (if you were attacking it from a safe spot) it will pick up a random pew from the room, and throw it at you, where you have to run, or else it will deal 3/4 of your LP. It can only do this eight times, since there are only eight pews. If you evaded the attack, it’ll be in the vicinity of you to attack you with melee.

Sparingly, also, it will release a discharge spell that is unavoidable. It will paralyze you for 15 seconds, and during that time, your Amulet of Eternal Fire may break! Shock If it does, you may have to leave and grab another. Luckily, it will only do this once.

Once it is ¼ dead, it will pulsate more magical energy and cause a miniature, blue force field around the doll. It can still attack you via range, but not melee and magic. You have to break it open with a melee attack, but here is the catch: you have to do it fast because it heals LP in this force field! It will not create a force field again, unless you restart the battle by dying. Shock

If you manage to die, your gravestone will appear near the entrance to the cult in the mini-swamp.

Once its LP is 0, unleash your last special attack on the Doll. It will explode in a fury of white sparks. You have to melee this hit.

Finally the beast is dead, (congrats! Shock) it’ll drop a Healer and the Demonic Doll. Pick up the Demonic Doll. The Healer it dropped will restore you to the state you were in before the battle use (the food you ate will even reappear in your pack). It will disappear upon use. The Demonic Doll won't sap your magical abilities anymore! YAY!

Oh by the way, the black hole thing is gone and in its place, is a pedestal that has the Final Fiyre!!


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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:26 pm

17. Like usual, pick it up. You will be interrupted by the Thief.
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Thief: "Are you a Cult member or not?"
You: "No, I am the mighty crusader who killed every member in this damned cult."
Thief: "Finally someone who isn't part of Gielinor's Fiyre! What are you doing here?"
You: "Searching for the Seventh Fiyre. What are you doing here?"
Thief: "Great question, I came here originally because this chamber has been empty for the longest of times."
You: "Really?"
Thief: "Yes, Gielinor's Fiyre only occupied this cave when Razz Elbein was on an unsuccessful pilgrimage. He was low on supplies, starving, and on the brink of death until he discovered this cave by accidentally tripping over a rock. Inside, there were about twelve altars pointing to each god. He interpreted this as a sign for all gods to live in harmony. Thus, gave him the inspiration to start what was supposed to be a holy faction. Sadly, about 450 years ago, Razz Elbein died and the new leader he assigned made it seem very unholy to the public. Alright, I told you the info, and you're ready to take the Fiyre, so now I must kill you."
You: "Wait, what? Please I have been through so much!”
Thief: “Sorry, but I am programmed to kill anyone who takes the sacred Fiyre"
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18. Kill the Thief. The thief will be easy if you turn on Piety and wear your Amulet of Eternal Fire (you’ll kill him in two hits).

19. Once you have killed him, take the Fiyre Sword OR Fiyre Bow (depending on which type you are searching for). A trap will be triggered and you appear outside in the small swamp thing.
CONGRATS! The Crusade is now over, and you may use Magic again! Grin

END OF THE CRUSADE


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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:28 pm

The Epilogue

1) Go back to Seth and talk to him. You destroyed the armada of bosses, so don't gear up for combat. There are only 4 steps left! Smile
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You: "Seth, I have great news!"
Seth: "Did you find the Fiyres?"
You: "Exactly!!!"
Seth: "Can you please tell me of your adventures? I would really like to hear!"
Then there will be a message in your chat interface saying, "You explain to Seth in detail your rather long journey."
Seth: "WOW! And I thought you were wimp! Anyways, we have all the materials to begin this ritual!"
You: "Excuse me, but what?"
Seth: "The ritual. You know... Calling upon a god and getting blessed and such."
You: "Oh yeah, that's right... So how will we do this?"
Seth: "We will first need to find some place very serene to where we can draw out the sand encryption. Then, the person, which is you, will read out of the Ritual Book while wearing every Fiyre, and then a God will come through the clouds or something... I don't know; it is all left unclear."
You: "Sounds menacing, but I'll try it. So, have any serene places in mind?"
Seth: "Perhaps Lletya?"
You: "Why Lletya?"
Seth: "Have you not been there?? That place is possibly the most serene town in the whole of Runescape!"
You: "Makes sense. Do you have all the materials required? I am certainly NOT going to go across the four corners of the world again for some stupid items while fighting off more enemies than I have EVER seen in my life."
Seth: "Well you are in luck, because during the entire time you were gone, I was searching the world for the items needed for this ritual."
You: "Well that's great! Let's get this show on the road!"
Seth: "Good thinking!"

The screen will fade to black and will say, "You and Seth travel through Isafdar, getting lost a few times, and eventually find Lletya."

*CUTSCENE (don't worry, this is the second to last one)*

The screen will fade from black to a nice view of Lletya. As you and Seth walk to the center of town, Seth will talk to you.
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Seth: "Well, here is our only shot. If we fail, the gods will get annoyed at us mortals and will kill us both; they will resurrect the Fiyre Thieves and send them to re-steal the Fiyres. This ritual has only happened twice. All the other times were failed attempts and the people were erased from existence and history."
You: "That's comforting. How do you even know of this?"
Seth: "It was listed in the ritual book in the Foreword. You silly adventurers only read what, 16 pages of all 200 pages?"
You: "Oh... Well, let's start this ritual! I REALLY want this quest over with as soon as possible!"
Seth: "Ok, being inpatient won't solve anything. Here, help me with this..."
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After the conversation, the screen will once again turn to black and a message on the screen says, "Hours later, you finally get the ritual ready..."

The screen fades from black and reveals an intricate sand pattern around the central well. You will be wearing all seven Fiyres. Seth will talk to you once more.
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Seth: Alright! We are ready! Just read from the book and the ritual will be complete!"
You: "Ok, here goes nothing..."
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.You will then read the book aloud, and then the camera will go crazy, everything will go white, and the camera will settle down. The white light will fade to a cloud with a yellow light shining above it. It will talk to you.
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Godly voice: "Mortal, why must call my presence? Haven't your prayers been enough communication?"
You: "Wow... I'm talking to an actual god.... Um... Your Godliness sir, I went on a mighty crusade to search for the Holy Fiyres in protection of the world. A cult threatened to have its leader rise to the status of a god, and thus awake Guthix to destroy and rebuild this world."
Godly voice: "So I see your Golden Deeds, you may keep the armor unless you go on a Pilgrimage to pray at most of all my altars scattered across Runescape. However, your sins have soiled and tainted the Holy Armour and Weapon. Please do not come back until you have served a pilgrimage."
You: "Yes your godliness. I shall."
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---- *end cutscene*

2) Go and pray at these ten altars of Saradomin in order. (You may teleport to these locations):

1. Lumbridge
2. Varrock
3. Edgeville Monastery
4. The Temple overlooking the entrance to Morytania (Paterdomus)
5. Entrana …be careful if you killed the Abbot! Confuse
6. Port Sarim
7. Seer's Village
8. East Ardougne
9. Ardougne Monastery
10. West Ardougne

Each time you pray at an altar, you will lose 10 Prayer Points and your Thieving, Slayer, and Construction level will lose 10 levels (like level 50/90; not the actual level). At the last altar, you will wind up with -10 Prayer points, Thieving and Slayer (-10/50) no matter what. They will drop to no less. You will not be able to re-generate these points until after the quest.

You must ONLY pray at those altars listed below, or else Saradomin will make your prayer points to level -50, and will deal 200LP to you.

3) Once you have prayed at the last altar, you will be teleported back to Lletya where you will meet the Godly voice.
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Godly voice: "Congratulations, your Pilgrimage proved successful! It was I who teleported you here. For those kind deeds, all of your sins are forgiven once more. You must now meet me in the afterlife if you have a question for thy god and your armour will no longer possess the ability to contact the gods."
You: "Wait! NO! I can't die! I need answers!"
Godly voice: "I know what things you inquire, but they are not for mortal ears. However, you will learn in time."

There will be another blue lightning strike that attacks you. Your stats will return back to normal, but this time you have 30 extra prayer points. (Your prayer level, however, will remain the same.)
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4) Speak to Seth.
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You: "Did you not see any of that?!?! THAT WAS POINTLESS!"
Seth: "No its not! Everything has its purpose, and now the gods don't hate you, you just solved some of the world’s greatest mysteries and added so very many! Thanks so much!!! I can never repay you!"
You: "I couldn’t have done it without you.”
Seth: “I don’t believe that! I’m just an outcast of society. I’m no hero.”
You: “Hah! Whatever! Well, I guess they call me an adventurer for a reason! It was all in a day's work."
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END OF THE EPILOGUE

End of Gielinor's Fiyre

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Post by Dragon78114 Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:32 pm

The Spoils of Effort

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Congratulations! You have completed Gielinor's Fiyre!
You are awarded:
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