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Post by Duskcurse Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:32 am

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Post by Duskcurse Mon May 07, 2012 9:56 pm

Yeah, COryza could be trying to help his fellow ice clan members anyway he/she can, also, what do youthink of adding a bloodwood tree in the ice sector? Perphas semi frozen?

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Post by Slayer Noir Mon May 07, 2012 10:01 pm

Bloodwood trees are supposed to be very difficult to access - they all exist either in the wilderness, or require a very difficult quest to do (Branches of Darkmeyer, Nomad's Requiem or ROTM).

I'd suggest wherever you place this bloodwood tree, that it's only accessible after the series finale.
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Post by Duskcurse Mon May 07, 2012 10:05 pm

I thought that the ice sector would be good, since it's the place of a mass murder, I imagine that the smoke sector almost wiped out the ice sector, and well, the ice sector has been th e msot damaged as there are cracks in the walls where there are some parts of the god wastes, wich has frozen that area, turing it into an agility curse
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Post by Slayer Noir Mon May 07, 2012 10:07 pm

Sounds good then. You have my seal of approval Tongue
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Post by Duskcurse Thu May 10, 2012 7:08 am

Hey Slayer, the first saga will be about the Venom SIsters and the Noir strikers.

The second saga, of three quests, will be about the Blood WItches and the ice secto's leaders, we need a name for them thought
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Post by Slayer Noir Thu May 10, 2012 7:31 am

Hang on, I don't understand? You're doing two sagas? Two separate quest series, one focusing on the Venom Sisters and the Noir Strikers, and the other focusing on the Blood Witches and the Fatigue Bringers? Why???
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Post by Duskcurse Thu May 10, 2012 7:37 am

Well, not two sagas, it's all part of one big saga, but hte stories are not connected per see, one features the Venom Sisters and Noir Strikers strongly, while the other revolves around hte relationship between Blood Witches and Fatigue bringers, more about their leaders, andh ow their relationship is transpapelated into their respective sectors
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Post by Slayer Noir Thu May 10, 2012 7:41 am

I thought the fates of the 4 cults were far too intertwined for the series to be split like that.

Ultimately, it's your quest series so it's your choice. You're free to disregard my advice, but my advice is to keep the 4 cults in 1 connected plotline.
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Post by Duskcurse Thu May 10, 2012 7:44 am

Ok, is that, you remember hte whole thing of the Blood Witches hunting the Fatigue Brigners leader? Thought that could make for some good quests as we develop the interaction between both of htem
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Post by Slayer Noir Thu May 10, 2012 7:52 am

Don't get me wrong, I do see your point. But I think as soon as you try and separate plotlines completely, and have a non-linear storyline, you complicate things and you'll loose some of the epicness of the story trying to make it work.

It would be fine if, say, the first quest focused more on the hunt for the Fatigue Bringers and the second quest focused more on the God Wastes and the Impurus, but you should still have a linear storyline, and you shouldn't try and exclude anything important from either of the quests.
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Post by Duskcurse Thu May 10, 2012 7:56 am

hmm I guess that you are alright, but the think it's that it isn't non linear, the hunt for the Fatigue Bringers would beafter the Impurus problems, since the remaining LAcertae will blame the Bringers for the cretion of the Impururs, you'll see why soon, but if you want to knwo right now I can send you a message, so the hunt would be liek a closing, as hte LAcertae species is trying to eliminate all threats.
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Post by Slayer Noir Thu May 10, 2012 8:00 am

Strange. I thought dealing with the Impurus was more climatic than dealing with the Fatigue Bringers, and so it should've been the other way round.

Send me the message, I can't form a proper opinion without all the information, and I might be wrong about this.
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