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Post by blank Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:36 am

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¤~¤Mood Key¤~¤
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Ok, first of all, the chapters up untill Orlando's Tale(not included) are of no importance, they don't follow the current plot I've come up with. Please note that it is 26 and a half pages long, so you're warned ^^ Grin That being said, I have nothing more to say. Well, here we go:

¤~¤The Legacy Of Legion IV: Crucible Of Crisis!¤~¤


The Legacy Of Legion IV: Crucible Of Crisis!
Description:
The death of Aegyrson has brought grim news. The Dungeon Overlord, Mycoloth, is rising large once again, and with that, the whole of Runescape is threatened by an all-out war, which is fought by nearly every race on Runescape. It is at our greatest time of peril, as we stand before a rising tide of danger, that the bravest in all the land will stand up, and fight for the worlds of Gielinor and Aera! Discover new secrets, empower your Sangrite, engage in an all-out war, fight the most ancient of foes, discover a secret that could change the world of Gielinor, and many, many more features await you in the fourth and final instalment on the Legacy of Legion Quest Saga: Crucible of Crisis!

¤Quest details:
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¤~¤Requirements¤~¤

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Rewards:
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¤~¤Walkthrough¤~¤

¤Chapter I: Menace of Mycoloth¤
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¤~¤ Orlando’s Tale ¤~¤
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¤ Chapter III: Sangrite Wonders ¤
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¤~¤ Chapter IV: The Gates of Aera ¤~¤
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¤~¤ Chapter V: The Desecration of Seravail ¤~¤
(Written partly by Blaziken Ff8/VerdantVulpe)
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¤ Chapter VI: Revelations
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¤ The Peril of Aera

-Coming soon! Grin


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Post by blank Thu Jul 22, 2010 12:43 am

¤ Chapter VII: The Peril of Runescape: A cry for help!
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Post by The Empty Lord Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:44 am

Before pasting it onto the forums, paste it into Notepad, then copy that. Notepad has absolutely no formatting, and even if you "clear formatting" on other word processors it still seems to have some hidden crap. It makes it so hard to read otherwise. Smile
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Post by Dragon78114 Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:08 am

Wow, and I thought Axar V and Gielinor's Fiyre was long! Tongue

Axar V was 16 pages long and I think Gielinor's Fiyre was like 56 pages in 10-point font (of course with the dialogue formatted and everything)- excluding requirements and rewards lol
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Post by blank Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:23 am

Thanks for the notepad thingy 3mpty, it's much, much better ^^
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Post by blank Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:28 am

And Confuse a thread of 56 pages? Thank God this was only 64 pages 'cuz of the added spaces ^^
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Post by Ruy112 Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:37 am

Will read... sometime Tongue
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Post by blank Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:38 am

Lol :p I'll be looking forward to it!
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Post by blank Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:54 am

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Post by Blaze FF8 Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:36 am

I've read through the first half. So far, it's sounding great! There's a lot of creativity going on here. Smile
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Post by blank Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:11 am

Thanks ^^ I quite like the Giant Frozen Hummingbird Grin I actually only put it in because my mom loves the animal ^^ Combined with Runescape, this came into being Grin
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Post by blank Fri Jul 23, 2010 8:13 am

Well, I'm gonna logoff for the day ^^ Bye all
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Post by blank Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:16 am

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Post by Ruy112 Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:41 pm

I'll read it now Smile

EDIT: I am completely lost, what is this a sequel to?
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Post by Blaze FF8 Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:27 pm

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The first three Legacy of Legion quests he made. I don't think they were posted here.
They're on the RS Forums though, and I'd definately have a look if I were you. Very creative stuff.

(That reminds me, I'd better finish reading this too. . .)
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Post by blank Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:58 pm

Ruy,

Here's the link, should you want it: http://services.runescape.com/m=forum/c=etC3dxWx714/forums.ws?241,242,720,61069240

Blaze,

You're flattering me :p I don't really like the first two quests, they're very weak plot-wise. I'm hoping to fix that when I re-write them.

And that would be appreciated ^^
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Post by Dragon78114 Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:11 am

Blaze FF8 wrote:^
The first three Legacy of Legion quests he made. I don't think they were posted here.
They're on the RS Forums though, and I'd definately have a look if I were you. Very creative stuff.

(That reminds me, I'd better finish reading this too. . .)

Blaze, you have yet to finish the Azzai! Tongue
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Post by blank Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:58 am

Bump, need more opinions ^^ Well, I need opinions Grin
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Post by blank Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:03 am

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Post by The Empty Lord Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:16 am

Jorral: Well, have you ever heard of the Sendir Tribe?
[You]: The Sendir Tribe?
Jorral: They’re an ancient tribe of, well, creatures would be the best way to describe them.
[You]: I suppose you want me to kill them?
Jorral: Oh, heavens no! The Sendir are harmless.
Remember, do not engage the tribe in battle!
[You]: Ok, I won’t. Now, I only need to know 1 more –
J: No you don’t. You have all the information you need.


Urgh, I'd like to point out that Jorral hasn't even requested anything of us. He just asked if we knew of them. Wink

I'm off to bed now, will read the rest tomorrow. Looking good so far, but I don't fully remember the previous segments - so some of the names are unfamiliar.
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Post by blank Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:20 am

Yes, but that is in the part that sucks, so I am going to re-write that before I actually release the quest ^^ I told you to start reading from a certain point somewhere above in the post, just can't remember from where... Probably from chapter 2(Orlando's Tale)
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Post by The Empty Lord Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:47 am

Oh, I must've ignore that request. Tongue
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Post by blank Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:25 am

No harm done lad ^^
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Post by blank Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:29 am

I've come up with a few Elven names for the war, could someone tell me if they sound Elvish enough?

(F)Aslynn, (M)Aztarwyn, (M)Leyro, (F)Glynndes, (F)Glyssria
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